tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post4348655861970719229..comments2023-12-11T20:04:16.370-08:00Comments on Allie's Musings: Wriers' Wednesday: How to Write Last LinesAllie Bonifacehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17334745422433097012noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post-30586823891515496732007-11-08T04:22:00.000-08:002007-11-08T04:22:00.000-08:00I love last lines! So important, yet sometimes so ...I love last lines! So important, yet sometimes so hard to write. :)Sarita Leonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09236262575377618259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post-33103966126007242232007-11-07T20:13:00.000-08:002007-11-07T20:13:00.000-08:00Liz, You're so right about last lines of chapters,...Liz, You're so right about last lines of chapters, too. They're a beast of a different kind...they *have* to hook the reader!Allie Bonifacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17334745422433097012noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post-8302032949146480582007-11-07T14:16:00.000-08:002007-11-07T14:16:00.000-08:00I also think the last line in chapters are importa...I also think the last line in chapters are important if you want your reader to turn the page instead of going to bed. LizAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post-41306996068105576722007-11-07T05:48:00.000-08:002007-11-07T05:48:00.000-08:00Great post, Allie! I like your last lines of LOST ...Great post, Allie! I like your last lines of LOST IN PARADISE.<BR/><BR/>Here are a some of mine:<BR/>NO GREATER LOSS: Katherine slept on her daddy's shoulder, looking like a little angel. He softly walked across the floor to his wife's side and gave her a gentle kiss. "This is better than any dream I ever had." <BR/> <BR/>A FIERY SECRET: "I'll just say that Jake is definitely my Mr. Right in every way possible."<BR/><BR/>THE CHRISTMAS OF 1957: "I read his letter every Christmas and once again, I am his little one. I feel his arms around me. Tears fill my eyes. I slowly read his words and get a warm feeling, just like the day I first received it. The warmth radiates from every part of my body and of course, I realize now, it's love I feel."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-32906017.post-84676012167376658442007-11-07T04:25:00.000-08:002007-11-07T04:25:00.000-08:00Hmmm....One Love For Liv: "Before she could say a...Hmmm....<BR/><BR/><I>One Love For Liv</I>: "Before she could say a word, he closed the distance between then and kissed her, the promise of forever in his touch."<BR/><BR/>Not bad.<BR/><BR/><I>Playing House</I>: "He thanked God for them all, the whole crazy bunch. They had saved him."<BR/><BR/><I>Miles From You</I>: ""I'm home, Millie." He whispered the words against her hair. "Home."<BR/><BR/>Not bad, I guess...<BR/><BR/>Can't wait for "Lost In Paradise"!!!Marianne Arkinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00934613403368823760noreply@blogger.com